Jamble_Wanglebork

Awwwn, no problem, since it's something personal... Sounds like it's going to be interesting, though.
            
            Thanks for sharing the name :). I feel like I'm being loved! Anyways, I'm glad you decided to continue a story. May you write it with smiles on your face. The kind that reaches your eyes, whether blue or black or green or whatsoever color your eyes are. Mine are black. Well, almost all of us here in my country have black eyes. If there should ever be any other colors, it will be blue, light brown or dark brown. :)

Hahaha, alright... But I'll be honest, you're really good at pointing out flaws in a story and other things, I might guess...
            
            But although you sure put light to my head about how Rossy should really feel after killing Bigi, I'd thought about it, too. It was all just part of my plan, cause I knew where I was heading at :)
            
            Also, about that first statement of yours, I don't agree much. You might not know how to put a story down the way you want - even I find it hard, sometimes - but I don't need to meet you and talk to you one-on-one, before I can tell that you don't lack creativity, at all. You should have a bit more confidence in yourself... always, Jamble ;)
            
            Wait, is that your real name??

@AdedumolaDairo 
            Well... I tried.
            
            I am not really good at it. I lack creativity and motivation. I also show too little of the feelings of a character.
            And also, whining about someone else's work is much less work than making something yourself.