Jessi Kent

Well, the overwhelming part was the result of being directly within the characters' heads and not knowing what was going on. Hehe. I'm glad you liked it! Next part will be up in September!

@EinatSegal Thank you for writing it! I really liked the characters and the world you built. I liked the plot as well, though at times i found it a bit overwhelming and hard to follow. Over all, it had me glued to the screen! Good luck on getting it published! I can't wait for the next one!

And I'm so glad you enjoyed Undefined. Thank you for all the votes, it means so much!