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Hey there!  I've posted the prologue of KY new werewolf story,  'The Boy Who Returned'.  It's a mystery thriller along with a bit of romance and adventure along the way,  could you check it out and tell me your thoughts on It? 
          
          Have a good day/night.

Jojo3431

@Pavonine_Gem3 Hey! I checked out your prologe and make a few comments of editing and stuff. Hope it helps  You definitely have a very creative story and a concept I haven't heard of before. I enjoy how you write! Don't just think I didn't because I left some comments. I hope you don't think they come off as  harsh. I'm jus trying to quickly help/edit to make your story better  I would say keep up with the story and keep writing!
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Jojo3431

@Pavonine_Gem3 Sure
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ScarletMisfit

Thanks for the follow and if you'd like checking out my book if ya get the chance

Jojo3431

@ScarletMisfit you're welcome
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ScarletMisfit

@ScarletMisfit I shall fix that. And thx XD
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Jojo3431

@ScarletMisfit Hey, I checked out your book. My main comment is that you made a typo in the title. It says "werewold" instead of "werewolf". Also good for you being 13 and writing a book! I wish I had the motivation to keep up with my writing
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