Hi Kalalea. Wow! You are an accomplished writer and I am somewhat hesitant about asking you to check out my (pitifully short) first chapter. Hopefully it will be humorous and romantic just as I visualize it. As a mom and grandmother, I getting a late start at writing. Always have been an avid reader. If by any chance you are even reading this, maybe you could take a quick peek at my story. Someone like you taking the time to let me know what you think would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. X Janice