Kartist3789

Hey guys, it's my BIRTHDAY! 
          	
          	I'm turning 18 today so I'm gonna spend all day celebrating and start writing tomorrow!
          	
          	Ok I just wanted ta let ya know love ya'll ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

Hazzabearswifey

Mind checking out my Dirty one shots book? Vote and leave some feedback please?:)

Kartist3789

@Hazzabearswifey I just read your one shots and I have to say they're pretty good. Although I will admit I'm not a one direction fan (sorry no offense) your stories were great. I will say that your pacing in the story is a bit rushed but still good. From my experience (from both reading and writing) I have to say that details are everything. They really put you into the story and make you feel like your there with the characters. So adding more details about the setting and the sex part would really give more depth to your stories. I really hope this helped and I'm really honored that you asked for my opinion. Happy Writing! ;) ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ 
            
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