@highpitched Hey, I wanted to give you an update, as I started your book. I think your writing style is amazing, and it was paced well. You also are amazing with the way he interprets her, it works really well through his eyes. I am so sorry to tell you, I am probably not the best person to give you criticism, as I don't read over 15+ books. I am very much a low spice reader lol. I will definitely recommend it to some of my Wattpad friends that I know will love it though, and off style alone, you are an amazing writer. I will leave some likes to boost your work, and I thank you so much for the love on mine. Definitely contact me again if you ever consider writing some lower spice books. I love your style.