Tmazrief
what we sayn on my book? Good or nah?
Lord-Nerd-The-First
@Tmazrief it's pretty good. Personally though, the first few chapters were hard to read since the scenes felt weird and kinda disconnected, I think. But overall you got potential to be a pretty good writer dude, good job
Lord-Nerd-The-First
@Tmazrief it's pretty good. Personally though, the first few chapters were hard to read since the scenes felt weird and kinda disconnected, I think but overall you got potential to be a pretty good writer dude, good job
Lord-Nerd-The-First
@Tmazrief it's pretty good. Personally though, the first few chapters were hard to read since the scenes felt weird and kinda disconnected, I think but overall you got potential to be a pretty good writer dude, good job
