Lurker-Kelefata

10 more days before the next updates wow, having a deadline is making me lock in heh...i was just laying around until I realized and im like...Septembers already going to be over.

Thi21lion71

Hello, how long have I come to ask how your writing is improving because I really miss your stories, I hope you are well too.

Thi21lion71

I can do that, I'll try to give my opinion to see the positives and negatives.
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Lurker-Kelefata

@Thi21lion71 that is actually so helpful! There are a few parts I havent/didn't proofread so if you could point them out id be forever grateful lol
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Thi21lion71

@Lurker-Kelefata If you need someone to review the story or give you a story idea, I'm always here
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FantasyEqualsReality

Hey are you still active and a Jungle Juice fan?

FantasyEqualsReality

Oh that's alright XD I was just looking for some fellow Jungle Juicers because I can't seem to find many
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Lurker-Kelefata

I've just been taking a break to make my writing better because looking back at some of my writing...sheesh
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Lurker-Kelefata

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Chapter 118 of BSD...
          
          I hate that fucking divine being and I hate that fyodor who created it came to help Atsushi??? And  at the same time I can't help but simp for him which is why he has got to have the worst death in my story ong

mishidt

hii :D how are u? 

Lurker-Kelefata

@mishidt as in fine wine? *drinks you* yum yum yum
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