Manglewolf13

Hey guys, I know it’s been a while, but I’m wanting to write a new story now that I’m older and would love some feedback! I have two ideas for a book.
          	
          	A Sinners Paradise: The richest man in the world, otherwise known as Alejandro Cortez hosts an annual tv show known as A Sinners Paradise or ASaP. This event, filled with Drugs, Alcohol, gambling, lots of sex and murders, keeps the interest of the entire world for four weeks straight. 
          	    A Sinners Paradise takes place on a massive Cruise ship and sails the sea until the next month where it brings only one survivor left. They return as one of the richest people in the world, but at what cost? Their sanity? Their very humanity?
          	    Thousands of invitations for this event are sent throughout the world. The poor souls to receive the invitations celebrate, while the others are forced to watch the horror unfold through a screen. 
          	     Why is this event such a love event if it's filled with death? Why is such a gruesome event allowed? Why doesn't the government do anything about it? Find out why as we follow Ember Barlowe as she uncovers the truth about this event, and even who the mysterious  Alejandro Cortez is. All to enjoy in A Sinners Paradise.
          	
          	What is love: Following the life of Amber Marsh as she writes an essay about what she feels love is. 
          	
          	Before Elliot Simms, Amber didn't know what love was, she had never experienced it before. But while writing her essay, she falls madly in love with star football player Elliot Simms. She finally understood what it was like to be in love, until it all brutally ended after Elliot gets hurt badly after a football game which later turns fatal. How will Amber deal with her heartbreak? Will she be able to write her essay, or will she fold into her depression?
          	
          	Which one should I do?

Manglewolf13

Hey guys, I know it’s been a while, but I’m wanting to write a new story now that I’m older and would love some feedback! I have two ideas for a book.
          
          A Sinners Paradise: The richest man in the world, otherwise known as Alejandro Cortez hosts an annual tv show known as A Sinners Paradise or ASaP. This event, filled with Drugs, Alcohol, gambling, lots of sex and murders, keeps the interest of the entire world for four weeks straight. 
              A Sinners Paradise takes place on a massive Cruise ship and sails the sea until the next month where it brings only one survivor left. They return as one of the richest people in the world, but at what cost? Their sanity? Their very humanity?
              Thousands of invitations for this event are sent throughout the world. The poor souls to receive the invitations celebrate, while the others are forced to watch the horror unfold through a screen. 
               Why is this event such a love event if it's filled with death? Why is such a gruesome event allowed? Why doesn't the government do anything about it? Find out why as we follow Ember Barlowe as she uncovers the truth about this event, and even who the mysterious  Alejandro Cortez is. All to enjoy in A Sinners Paradise.
          
          What is love: Following the life of Amber Marsh as she writes an essay about what she feels love is. 
          
          Before Elliot Simms, Amber didn't know what love was, she had never experienced it before. But while writing her essay, she falls madly in love with star football player Elliot Simms. She finally understood what it was like to be in love, until it all brutally ended after Elliot gets hurt badly after a football game which later turns fatal. How will Amber deal with her heartbreak? Will she be able to write her essay, or will she fold into her depression?
          
          Which one should I do?

Manglewolf13

I can’t seem to finish my stories before I find another idea for a story. I’ve told myself I’m not making another story until I’ve finished the ones I have already, but I have so many idea for books. I want to do a horror story but I’m forcing myself to stay with the books I have. I kinda don’t have the motivation to write those stories anymore though. 

Manglewolf13

Sorry I haven’t been updating my stories. I haven’t really had much motivation to keep writing, and I’ve kinda been in a low place lately, but I promise I will start writing again, hopefully soon! Love you guys and thank you for taking time to read my terrible stories ✌

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