Mecuris

@appleberry14325 thank you as well! I already saw it! :D

Thank you so much! I have already left a comment on your poetry 

@appleberry14325 ok so i've what you've posted so far its really good. 
            
            Although it feels a bit rushed... like if you add more spaces in between the chats between Sweetcakes and Tyler in the flashback chapter that would be better. Also basic spelling, grammar errors not too bad, I can gather what you meant 
            
            All in all it's really good. I really like Emma's outburst now. My first thought when I saw she was pregnant and doesn't mention a child was... did I miss something?  but it all came together nicely in her rant