MightyMidget13

@CosmicWriter  You have some great poems! I will keep reading, Thank You

MightyMidget13

Hey Everyone. I'm trying a dark fairytale approach and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the prologue... I'm not sure how this is going to turn out and I would really appreciate some advice. Please read and comment! I need the help. Thanks!

MightyMidget13

So i'm not officially done with it but i was talkin to my best friend and decided i couldnt wait to publish it. I hope to finish it soon but for now this is all i have. Its the second of my violence of the past series so if you read the first i encourage you to read and if not well i always enjoy the critique. Please and help me out, it needs more!