Mo0NcHi1LD

Gonna be rewriting some stuff from stories, so I unpublished them while I worked on it, will take a while.

Spiderboyyyyyyyyyyy

An issue I have with forced hero is zero’s 180’s. Going from angry to embarrassed is kinda unrealistic for that type of oc.

Mo0NcHi1LD

@Spiderboyyyyyyyyyyy I can see that, but he is also 15. I personally had huge mood swings so I styled it off of that. But its cool that you are criticing my work as I do need to practice more. Heck I might hire you to proof read my stuff if I ever have money for that. So thanks friendly stranger!
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Spiderboyyyyyyyyyyy

I was honestly thinking that the oc from forced hero would not change his views at all but I guess the story is good. The title is misleading to those who are looking for a fic where a character doesn’t give a damn about wasted potential or something like that. They don’t want to make sacrifices or help anyone out, and that’s not a bad thing. Can I do an altered version of your story on my account please?

Mo0NcHi1LD

@Spiderboyyyyyyyyyyy yeah why not, its cool that someone even kinda likes this so go ahead and make your version. Ill make sure to read yours for support. And trust me im not done with the OC, stuff will change. Just trying to make it more drastic
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