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Hi well I'm just asking a favor and I hope you're not offended by it, I know this is sort of advertising and I apologize in advance forIT if I offend you. Anyway, do you mind checking out my new story, "The Kingdom of Conspiracies"? I just need some feedback on it so far, I've only writtent the preview. Thanks, and I'll do the same for you if you just comment on it.