capricorn202

One humble request..can you please revisit the initial chapters of Shielded by my bodyguard story & correct the spelling mistakes & grammatical errors? It distracts my attention from.a strong plotline & this is one story that I would love to re-read. 

MsArmY57

@capricorn202 hey do not thank me i am greatfull to you point out my faults and  make me a better writer as like my well wisher , i shot it up soon❤️
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capricorn202

@MsArmY57 thank you for taking my suggestions positively looking forward to reading the next chapters eagerly 
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MsArmY57

@capricorn202  thank you for your help mam, i surely recheck everything again .. and how haseena connection with the mission you will learn about it more in future chapter but right now i clearly mention as becouse there are 5 company under gov tried up with cyber safety department they are chosen to be protected as becouse of musa team want to misuse the data sell it and lead money tracking from innocent peaple and karishma was not first in charge as you see there was a another senior officer but he was in this crime so he got arrested when they rescue karishma from goons she was just allocated there for safety as such along with other 4 company are there gov chose karishma there is just a gov order and abhimanuyu side of story past reveal will come when it will be more interesting
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Fizaidrishi

Next update kab aayega

MsArmY57

@Fizaidrishi umm.. Actually I don't have that kinda life problem it's just general student activities which make me stop to published my own story even this time no one tell me out of some meny work I take a long distance and right now I totally forget what the climax I thought at last time ¯ really yaar I read everything again last night after your suggestion 
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Fizaidrishi

jab sab thik ho tabhi karna
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MsArmY57

@Fizaidrishi   sorry yaare, I am really under pressure those days i give update sooner ❤
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