storyteller1103

Hello,
          I really like the premise of your story,nice opening scene, very visual.
          I have a short story around 500 words from the same genre and similar style.I would love if you could check it out if you have time?Its always nice to get some feedback.Many Thanks

MylilPony33

@storyteller1103  Your welcome and thanks for the luck.
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storyteller1103

@AmelyBlatna Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story.I appreciate your helpful feedback.I am definitely going to take this advice on-board. Good luck with school and everything.Take care.
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MylilPony33

@storyteller1103 I thought that it would take me a few days to anwser back but my feeback is to give Dylan more personality
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