MyxLovelyxPhoenix

Yall know what time it is

MyxLovelyxPhoenix

I have a fic in the works right now, and I should be publishing it sometimes soon… 

fox_212

@MyxLovelyxPhoenix It changes from her original to a doe, nice one day someone will hopefully get Hedwig as a patronus lol.
            I expected more lemon content in sixth year because of the content or seventh, i love the story I rate it 8.5 because of George.
            Anyway any news on your new story?
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MyxLovelyxPhoenix

short answer: it changes, but her it's mentioned at the end of the book is a doe! 
            
            it's mentioned during the end of their third year (specifically chapter 20), and then during their meetings with Dumbledore's Army during their fifth year, and then again in chapter 29 of their (would be) seventh year
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fox_212

@MyxLovelyxPhoenix What's evergreen's Patronus? I can't find the chapter where it was mentioned
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xoxo_ck

I hope you know that from time to time I reread your book

fox_212

@MyxLovelyxPhoenix I might be a bit biased - actually, I’m 100% sure I am - but I definitely loved her more with Harry. Her relationship with George just felt way too perfect for me, and I can't help feeling like she used him as a rebound or just a way to stop thinking about Harry. George was really sweet to her, which was nice to see, but it makes me wonder if he ever truly got over her since it sounded like he was totally in love with her. I also have to wonder: did she actually keep the bracelet after getting married? This version of Harry is so jealous that I don't think he’d ever allow it, but hey, stranger things have happened.
            I’d happily rate the story a 9.5 out of 10, but I’m really hoping for more character development for Harry, like maybe a love interest who actually helps him grow. Not to mention, he only ever saw the "perfect" side of her and George, so he’s constantly questioning if he’s even worthy or good enough. When you add in his childhood trauma, it's pretty clear that watching her be happy with someone else is wrecking his mental health. Since his self-worth is so tied to her validation, just watching from the sidelines feeds this slow-burning bitterness; he really needs to find some peace within himself before all that resentment boils over and sabotages any chance at a healthy future.
            Sorry for overanalysing everything I had an English final today and I had to write 3 essays it's messing with my mind. Oddly enough I'm watching a Harry Potter ad. 
            Hope you write a Harry fiction soon. Good luck
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MyxLovelyxPhoenix

@xoxo_ck 
            
            1. My favorite part has got to be years 5th-7th. I'm not sure why but writing those was !00% the most enjoyable 
            2. George was better for Evergreen, in my opinion, but Harry was deep down the guy she always wanted. She loved both of them, of course, but she always had that softer spot for Harry
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fox_212

@xoxo_ck What's your favourite part of the story? And what do you think relationship wise is better her with H or G
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