cupcakeangeI
Your first chapter was good!! I’m excited to see more of Andrew and Clara flow as you continue to write !! Maybe it’s just my preference and I’m most definitely the last person to take writing advice from but maybe try to add some more banter just kinda make it balanced with her internal monologue!!
Novelsbycamii
Thank you so much!! I’m so happy you liked the first chapter! And thanks for the feedback, I’ll definitely keep that in mind while writing the next chapters. !