@PROPOWER0
Well its been a long time, I took some time off but now its game time. Tales of Ornia is coming back, chapters 1-3 have been revised and edited, and chp 3-6 are coming soon. I dont think you're quite ready.
Tales of Ornia Chapters 1-3- https://www.wattpad.com/story/268420584-tales-of-ornia
its finally here my wonderful writers
https://www.wattpad.com/1142346917?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=PROPOWER0&wp_originator=naume9bg1fNudsJTX4vGjMh8HHphxnbloZ05F7JvDT5%2FuPDYheyO1oDHSPsxhN2xSN2Koti7GBsY%2BbOyUidSg1NcMqXiLj%2FJLmNtcRNhbvh4%2BqdIQ%2BmtoXsIb0VR1RRC
https://www.wattpad.com/story/270399614-maxis-boy-of-wonder I think your gonna love it.
I know people complain about too much dialogue in a story, however, I believe that I would much rather read a character have a very meaningful and long conversation than TO KNOW SOMETHING LIKE: the sunlight hit Samuels face like a burning high bonfire.
What are your thoughts :)
@PROPOWER0 dialouge that is interesting (like topics change fast) is great. I prefer it over description, but you have to strike the balance between short and choppy and way too lengthy if yk what I mean?
