Pescidragon

Thought it was great,  interested to see where its going.
            Like how you gave the reader enough info to want to see chapter 2.
            Also liked that you googled the name of that flower that ppl always grow on their gates.
            Also see if you can get the local name of that flower, to compliment the pidgin Jide used. It gives the book a native feel.

Okay, just finished it

@purgingmelancholi sure