PithofPassion

@ShyNightshade Well, I only read the first 7 or so poems sequentially. After I got a feel for how the collection would be, I danced around it, looking at any titles that drew my attention. While I do think you have a good style and I can see the appeal in your type of poetry, it's not a style I personally read emphatically. It's more of a hit or miss with every piece. You do convey interesting messages, but there isn't too much discern. Though you do use a great deal of extended metaphor, the overall message is usually given fairly straightforwardly through the context of your pieces.
            
            Not that that's a bad thing. It's an appealing style to many...hence the number of reads and votes the work has garnered, and I think it could garner much more, in fact, it would surprise me if it didn't. 
            
            In any case, I wish you luck on your quest for reader retention. And perhaps I may stumble across more interesting pieces of your work in the future.

@PithofPassion Ahh thank you so much! Readers like you keep me going!
            
             I haven't seen you reading beyond 'Scream, but Scream Different Notes', though?

@ShyNightshade No problem. You have a neat style blended between worldly, poetic storytelling and a narrative tone that's taken up on pieces such as "Feminism" where there isn't really a story, but still a message to be said.