TaliaVone45

Hey !!! Can you make a fan fiction of ash had a sister gone for years when ash was 5 
          He dont Remember her 
          Can you pretty please

TaliaVone45

She also a trainer
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Abhishek_roy21

Hiiii guys 
          
          Sorry for posting here author.. 
          
          I'm new writer just started writing an anime story.. so I want review for the story from you and readers to improve it and write from your guys feedback... 
          
          Try my story guys.. give some of your precious time ️and feedback my story.. if you like my story then vote for sure.. your feedbacks and votes means lot to me .. I'm waiting for your response.. thank you 
          
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hiranyamittal04

bro your story of rise of hero is great till chapter 18 last paragraph but when you mentioned what beartic did to riachu my brain could not process it. its not like i don't i cant see or read people dying in movies or stories but seeing a pokemon or animal i such condition my stomach cant digest it. i think you went too overboard at that time if instead of that you could have just made riachu severely injured that would be better. anyway nice story till chapter 18 cant read ahead because of this.

rinrinrinyuki

What happened to you?? You haven't being active for 3 years i hope u doing ok..

NotSixJS

@Sobble_fan I believe God, and may God Bless You
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