Nevansthoughts

Heyyy reader caught youu !!
          
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          Reading Inaayat ....... 
          As Inaayat's author, I've been a bit demotivated lately due to the lack of votes. Would you mind taking a little time to give me some feedback on the book?

Preetyandsavage

@Nevansthoughts hi author  it's amazing I'm still at the adoption ch srry as life is happening but I'll cover up and it's amazing as I have only read few ch but hoping to catch up more goofy adhrit and I feel like abhay ,rey and adhrit gonna give a pure headache to arnav but I'm loving the book it's amazing  keep writing gonna vote and comment a lot,I'm really srry of my comments doesn't do justice with ur amazing writing skills as I'm really bad with words.
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penmedown_

The ride home was as lively as our town's graveyard. I was glued to the door the entire time, ready to jump out the minute we got to my house or just in case he decided to bring up what Dream Hero had had no problem discussing. I clutched the door handle like it was a lifeline and prayed it wouldn't result in me jumping out of a moving car.
          
          Hero didn't seem to notice. 
          
          It was clear that his mind was somewhere else. He didn't try to talk to me like he had done back in class which was good because all that I could think about was the fact that he had friendzoned me and that he had gotten Melissa's name wrong.
          
          I wanted to correct him so bad that I just—
          
          "It's Melissa." I blurted out the minute I got out of the car. "The girl Donovan's with, her name is Melissa. Not Melinda."
          
          "Okay? Potato Tomato." was his response. He looked at my hand that was still clutching the car door before looking back at me. "Can I go now?"
          
          "It's actually," I chuckled nervously, letting go of the door. "It's, um, tomato—Potato Potato and Tomato Tomato but I get your confusion—"
          
          "Harley."
          
          "Hm?"
          
          "Close the door." He muttered and I scrambled to do just that before rushing to get inside so that I could scream into my pillow at how ridiculous I had just been."Harley." He called out once more and I screeched to a halt like an unoiled robot, waiting for him to speak.
          
          "Check your messages once in a while." He mumbled. "Otherwise exchanging numbers would be pointless, wouldn't it?"
          
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Rimlisharma6

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          Sorry for posting here without your permission. Please check out my book. I hope you will like it 

Preetyandsavage

@Rimlisharma6 ^⁠_⁠^ =⁠_⁠=>⁠.⁠<
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Rimlisharma6

@Rimlisharma6 thank you once again. You are such a sweetie ❤️❤️
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Preetyandsavage

@Rimlisharma6 u really deserve it ^⁠_⁠^ I'll surely do that and plzz update soon but no pressure take ur time^⁠_⁠^B⁠-⁠)
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