RainWolf763

I made a proper cover for the new Indoraptor book/fanfic. The plot and story is seperate from and unreleated to my other jurassic world series
          	
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/406121714

RainWolf763

@justcause187just I named him Indo because it works really well where Blue is tired, so just names him something basic. I also think it works well for humanization, if he doesn't have a hyperaggressive name, as his character is already pretty excesive with being a macho bulletproof, living weapon made for war
          	  
          	  I don't want to name him Reaper, Slash or Ripper because it sounds too cheesy. 
          	  
          	  For example: The living weapon who was made in a lab for war, is named killer because he kills people
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justcause187just

@Raptor71 or Reaper like the Grim Reaper since he's the last thing his victims ever see
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Not_a_guy5068

First off, woah, what happened to your other stories dude?
          
          And second, you might not see an update on The Sharptooth War for a while. I intend to fully finish the book behind the scenes before releasing a single chapter.

RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 I deleted the apocalpyse guide and wojak book. The others are just unpublished, I will republish the other Indoraptor series, when I can make a new cover for the Redemption one 
            
            2. Sounds good
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Not_a_guy5068

Should I make it Canon that Sharpteeth are terrified of their wives/mates? Basically, they're the boss, and when their males get a bit out of line or do something dumb, they flee for their lives because their mates scare them and will hurt them.
          
          They're idiots, but they're the female's idiots.

RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 Got it, makes more sense. In my opinion I still think it should be applied to only one releationship, instead of all sharpteeth
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Not_a_guy5068

@Not_a_guy5068 I meant it more in a comedic sense, not actual physical harm. Maybe in a goofy side project?
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RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 I think if it was just one releationship it could work for a part of a story, but I don't like the idea of it applying it to them all
            
            I don't think it is good for couples to be hurting each other and setting that for the standard in the book's sharptooth society would make it so you have to dramatically change preivious books and the current one's plot. 
            
            Sharptooth wouldn't be able to argue with Regina that Tyrant is bad, becuase he would be too afraid of getting killed by her. I don't even think Tyrant would be in charge since he is male in that society
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Not_a_guy5068

Hey guy! Been a while, so here's an update for you!
          
          I updated Coming Storm to Reunion, if you want to check it out. Also, the story is getting close to the climax, and let's just sat there will be some surprising moments.
          
          Also, love the ripper story, cant wait for... uh, chapter 7 I believe?

RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 Thanks! Looking forward to checking out the new Reunion chapter
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Not_a_guy5068

Okay, update and question.
          
          I took down the latest two chapters as it moved the story forward too quick. I need to focus on Regina's growth and her plan to stop Tyrant more.
          
          I also decided to not add a song, as it didn't fit in the story at all. 
          
          
          That being said, how do you think I should proceed with the Regina plot? And should there be conflict in the valley as Tyrant approaches?

RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 Maybe there could be other actors, besides Tyrant, who want power in the Sharptooth pack. Regina could face the dilemma of lending support to an ambitious sharptooth in mutiny against her brother. Alternately, I thought the plot of her turning others towards peace worked well.
            
            There could be conflict in the valley, I thought the council's dynamics was interesting
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RainWolf763

I made a proper cover for the new Indoraptor book/fanfic. The plot and story is seperate from and unreleated to my other jurassic world series
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406121714

RainWolf763

@justcause187just I named him Indo because it works really well where Blue is tired, so just names him something basic. I also think it works well for humanization, if he doesn't have a hyperaggressive name, as his character is already pretty excesive with being a macho bulletproof, living weapon made for war
            
            I don't want to name him Reaper, Slash or Ripper because it sounds too cheesy. 
            
            For example: The living weapon who was made in a lab for war, is named killer because he kills people
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justcause187just

@Raptor71 or Reaper like the Grim Reaper since he's the last thing his victims ever see
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M1A2sepv3Abrams

You Should def do a collab with me cuz you can def do that

M1A2sepv3Abrams

collaberating is a thing??? i was just saying random things
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Not_a_guy5068

OK, in a hypothetical future, where Regina died, how do you think Sharptooth would react?
          
          Yes, everything else happened to him as well.

RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 In Sharptooth's current state I think it would completely and utterly break him.
            
            Not that I want it to happen, but I'm curious as to how it would occur. The biggest threat to everyone is Tyrant, yet Regina is the one who is safest from him. Maybe Tyrant snaps when Regina finds out too much or Regina could die being caught in the crossfires of the Valley Battle trying to convince everyone to stand down
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Not_a_guy5068

Fun Fact! 
          
          Tyrant is actually way younger than Sharptooth, about 9 years younger. 
          
          Sharptooth himself is canonically 36 years old, about older middle aged for a Sharptooth. Meaning Tyrant would be about 27, and would place Regina in the category of 27 to 26.
          
          Chomper's parents, and Sharptooth's father, have lived for a while, in their 40 's at least, and Chomper is actually around 22 years old, as I put a gap between the first movie and the second, where the gang first saw Chomper hatch.
          
          RedClaw is basically the same age as Sharptooth, maybe a few days younger at most.
          
          Kind of wild.

Not_a_guy5068

@Raptor71 Nah, age gap is staying. It isn't a huge one.
            
            As for the art, just the two of them standing side by side.
            
            Tyrant is a Sharptooth who has black skin, but looks like a regular Sharptooth. Regina is a sort of reddish burgundy, and her eyes are green.
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RainWolf763

@Not_a_guy5068 
            Just to confirm is Regina twenty SIX or twenty SEVEN? Jokes aside, could Regina and Tyrant be made older to reduce the age gap between Regina and Sharptooth? 
            
            Also could you describe the fanart you wanted of Regina and Tyrant, along with their physical descriptions. I know Tyrant has red eyes and both are T-Rexs but do now know much else about what they look like
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