@RainWolf763
Hey dude!
I have a question.
The next chapter in Sharptooth War is going to be a funeral for Ducky and the others who died in Tyrant's attack. But I can't figure out a good chapter name.
Any ideas?
I have Started A New Story Dedicated with RainWolf763 comments in mind. As he is the motivation and reason i started this story. Therefore he will be credited in the intro. I put all his favorite parts he liked about marcus and shoved them into one long impossible not to laugh story. Markus being Isakai in a game while passing out at his computer. Finding himself now stuck in the virtual world. Now in constant argument with the admin who uses him as entertainment he must beat the game and beat the living hell out of the admin or try to. Currently on chapter 12. As he requested longer content. And static is on hold for reconstruction as some errors were caught by wolf that needs fixed or rewritten hope this soon to be released story makes up for static being on hold. I need rewrite some future chapters.
@ZedoTheHedo sorry hiring someone on Fivver to proof read it lol unless you want that job
Now every time your at Walmart and you see the customer service center your think of Marcus
@ZedoTheHedo The short stories are fun, But I like the longer stories like Static. The characters and plot are more meaningful, while still having the clever humor as the short stories
Hello RainWolf!
I have come to see how you're doing! How are thee?
Also, I released a new chapter to Sharptooth War if you would like to check it out.
@RainWolf763 Another chapter is out, and this one is... well, let's just say pretty dark.
Woah now, where are all your other books?
Should I make it Canon that Sharpteeth are terrified of their wives/mates? Basically, they're the boss, and when their males get a bit out of line or do something dumb, they flee for their lives because their mates scare them and will hurt them.
They're idiots, but they're the female's idiots.
@Not_a_guy5068 Got it, makes more sense. In my opinion I still think it should be applied to only one releationship, instead of all sharpteeth
@Not_a_guy5068 I meant it more in a comedic sense, not actual physical harm. Maybe in a goofy side project?
@Not_a_guy5068 I think if it was just one releationship it could work for a part of a story, but I don't like the idea of it applying it to them all I don't think it is good for couples to be hurting each other and setting that for the standard in the book's sharptooth society would make it so you have to dramatically change preivious books and the current one's plot. Sharptooth wouldn't be able to argue with Regina that Tyrant is bad, becuase he would be too afraid of getting killed by her. I don't even think Tyrant would be in charge since he is male in that society
Hey guy! Been a while, so here's an update for you!
I updated Coming Storm to Reunion, if you want to check it out. Also, the story is getting close to the climax, and let's just sat there will be some surprising moments.
Also, love the ripper story, cant wait for... uh, chapter 7 I believe?
Okay, update and question.
I took down the latest two chapters as it moved the story forward too quick. I need to focus on Regina's growth and her plan to stop Tyrant more.
I also decided to not add a song, as it didn't fit in the story at all.
That being said, how do you think I should proceed with the Regina plot? And should there be conflict in the valley as Tyrant approaches?
@Not_a_guy5068 Maybe there could be other actors, besides Tyrant, who want power in the Sharptooth pack. Regina could face the dilemma of lending support to an ambitious sharptooth in mutiny against her brother. Alternately, I thought the plot of her turning others towards peace worked well. There could be conflict in the valley, I thought the council's dynamics was interesting
OK, changed the chapter a bit. Should be a bit better now.
I made a proper cover for the new Indoraptor book/fanfic. The plot and story is seperate from and unreleated to my other jurassic world series
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406121714
@justcause187just I named him Indo because it works really well where Blue is tired, so just names him something basic. I also think it works well for humanization, if he doesn't have a hyperaggressive name, as his character is already pretty excesive with being a macho bulletproof, living weapon made for war I don't want to name him Reaper, Slash or Ripper because it sounds too cheesy. For example: The living weapon who was made in a lab for war, is named killer because he kills people
@Raptor71 or Reaper like the Grim Reaper since he's the last thing his victims ever see