RanDomNesS1621

I know I've been gone for a LONG time, but I'm finally back and I'm definitely going to continue "Angel" and "Grey Skies", and maybe a couple of new additions :D

BecsB17

I miss you! I just got back into this, hopefully I can get my inspiration back and start putting my stories up. Howbhas everything gone with you? College? I remember Calculas like it was yesterday. Funny moments, forever memories.

OldEMSkeelsCaldwell

It wouldbt let me post ny review of C3 on it so ill post it here :)'BUT Ryder noticed I was good with technology' you put 'by'.
          
          Also don't extend words and by this I mean you wrote 'I felt soooo accepted' I would have written 'I felt so accepted' and put the 'so' in italics for emphasis.
          
          Te emotion is so much better than C1!!!
          
          I love Jace, he is my king and Everett is God!!!
          
          I am so adding this its bl***y brilliant!!!! Keep it up or I will force te zombies upon you!!!
          
          Overall Rate of all chapters critiqued: 9