Reinbokuru888

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I honestly think I might of made Rein a bit of a Gary stu. Idk, I don’t WANT to make him one even though I’m probably doing a pretty shit job at it, I’ll try to show he isn’t really one in the next chapter, and if I do, a sequel.

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I mean, in the first Freezing Royalty chapter, SPOILER ALERT: Rein probably would have died from drowning if it wasn’t for Thunder saving him because he isn’t really a great swimmer.  Rein isn’t really an overly admired person, sure he ended up on the news and he does have fans, mostly in Skeratol, but there are people who hate him aswell, especially if they look up to Masquerade, and Rein wouldn’t want to be famous anyways, he’d rather just keep to himself, hell, the royalties didn’t even know he existed until Rein himself met them, and he didn’t even tell them he saved a planet. And another flaw is his bluntness. He is rather blunt sometimes, but does try to be polite too. And I wanna try making him a little bit more blunt instead of flanderising him into a bitch aswell.
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Reinbokuru888

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I honestly think I might of made Rein a bit of a Gary stu. Idk, I don’t WANT to make him one even though I’m probably doing a pretty shit job at it, I’ll try to show he isn’t really one in the next chapter, and if I do, a sequel.

Reinbokuru888

I mean, in the first Freezing Royalty chapter, SPOILER ALERT: Rein probably would have died from drowning if it wasn’t for Thunder saving him because he isn’t really a great swimmer.  Rein isn’t really an overly admired person, sure he ended up on the news and he does have fans, mostly in Skeratol, but there are people who hate him aswell, especially if they look up to Masquerade, and Rein wouldn’t want to be famous anyways, he’d rather just keep to himself, hell, the royalties didn’t even know he existed until Rein himself met them, and he didn’t even tell them he saved a planet. And another flaw is his bluntness. He is rather blunt sometimes, but does try to be polite too. And I wanna try making him a little bit more blunt instead of flanderising him into a bitch aswell.
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Reinbokuru888

CHAPTER 6 IN 2 DAYS! This chapter will be longer than usual, same with Chapter 7 and 8 as they’re the biggest chapters in the story.

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Oh and one more thing, I might have to set the story to mature, because the final two chapters are gonna be quite brutal and violent. So if you wanna read them, you may wanna set your account to around 18+, the age recommendation for the story is 16+ and I want people at around that age range or above to read it. So as long as you set your account 18+, you can read it. If not, create an alt or smth idk.
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cameronmadison

Awesome, can't wait! Looking forward to seeing how their friendship develops and what the cloaked figure's deal is. Keep it coming! Btw I’ve been reading your story and some scenes really stood out to me visually. I’m a paid artist, and they actually inspired a few illustration ideas in my mind. Would you be interested if I shared them with you?

Reinbokuru888

@cameronmadison nice, also I made a new instagram if you wanna follow that lol https://www.instagram.com/reinwashere888/
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cameronmadison

I've sent you a req under the name of business acount Elitesyncglobal
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Reinbokuru888

@cameronmadison I have a Twitter if you wanna follow me there too @reinbokuru
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