RinaLavert

Hi guys! The YSL novel is going to get a major update to the first few chapters, so the line comments are gonna get removed, unfortunately  After writing 30 chapters of this book I looked back on the first ones and found many mistakes and poor writing. It bugs me too much to leave as is, will edit and rewrite everything <\3

RinaLavert

@Neonandnoise Don't you worry, chapters will still be coming out every week, need to push myself to finish the novel  I noticed that many people stop reading around Chapter 5 so the's probably as far as I'll edit
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Neonandnoise

@RinaLavert Oh I totally get this! Re-reading my older chapters makes me cringe so hard sometimes and I just want to rewrite it all. Will you still be updating as well, or are you going to focus on editing for now?
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RinaLavert

Hi guys! The YSL novel is going to get a major update to the first few chapters, so the line comments are gonna get removed, unfortunately  After writing 30 chapters of this book I looked back on the first ones and found many mistakes and poor writing. It bugs me too much to leave as is, will edit and rewrite everything <\3

RinaLavert

@Neonandnoise Don't you worry, chapters will still be coming out every week, need to push myself to finish the novel  I noticed that many people stop reading around Chapter 5 so the's probably as far as I'll edit
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Neonandnoise

@RinaLavert Oh I totally get this! Re-reading my older chapters makes me cringe so hard sometimes and I just want to rewrite it all. Will you still be updating as well, or are you going to focus on editing for now?
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everso_thenight

Hellooooooo are you still doing r4r???

everso_thenight

@RinaLavert Thank you! I really appreciate for taking the time to. I'll be sure to check yours out and leave some comments
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RinaLavert

@everso_thenight Hiiii! Yes, I'm a little behind at the moment but I'll add your work to the reading list
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ritaquill

I went on a cruise this summer and wanted to write about a group of friends working on a cruise ship, but I just didn't have the time!
          So, I'm just reading your story about friends working at a resort (close enough!). I am liking it so far!

RinaLavert

Thank you so much!
            And your idea is actually very interesting, cruise ships are notorious for crew drama since everyone is cooped up in one place, so I’d love to read something like that one day!
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EmOswellWrites

Hey Rina, so random but it just popped into my head... how was your drawing going for your cover?!❤️

EmOswellWrites

@EmOswellWrites ah girl, that's fair enough... it's so hard when something isn't going right, 100% discouraging but well done for even giving it a go!
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RinaLavert

@EmOswellWrites I got the background, general shapes of the characters and their hair done but when I attempted to draw faces… let’s just say I got really discouraged and gave up 
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RinaLavert

Guys. I just realizes that my novel will for sure have to be split into TWO books. There's too much material to fit into one. Maybe it's destiny since only 2 people actually read it (shoutout to EmOswell and Neon&Noise  <3 ) 

Neonandnoise

@RinaLavert I agree with Em! ❤️ And there are also the silent readers, I'm sure there's more than just us 2 who enjoy your story!
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EmOswellWrites

@RinaLavert A second book you say!? AMAZING NEWS!! I'm going to get double the dose of Kira and her life, Eek. Always be here reading at supporting you girl, your book deserves so much recognition♡
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RinaLavert

New chapter in less than 24 hours ⏳ Also I will be starting the book cover redesign soon - no more AI ‍♀️ Hand drawn by yours truly, wish me luck!

EmOswellWrites

@RinaLavert The faces will come! Congrats on nailing the background though, you've so got this!
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Neonandnoise

@RinaLavert Good luck! So cool that you're drawing the cover yourself! I bet that's pretty challenging. Especially when you've created the main characters in your mind and have a super clear idea of how they look, but you don't have an actual model to reference
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RinaLavert

@EmOswellWrites thank you! It’s looking a bit rough so far, especially the faces. I nailed the background in one day but the characters themselves… let’s just say I now get why most romance book covers are so simplistic 
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RinaLavert

Just finished a new chapter and immediately published it so it doesn't get buried by the algorithm! The next chapter isn't even fully written yet omg.. How do you guys do it? I don't usually write chronologically so this is really testing my discipline.

Natalie00XO

@RinaLavert I bet! To each their own of course but the site makes it difficult to find anything outside the obvious and promoted stuff
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RinaLavert

@Natalie00XO oh yeah! I’m obsessed with destination romance and just books about traveling in general, and I swear they’re easier to find at a bookstore than here :(
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Natalie00XO

@RinaLavert I can only imagine! I know it's sort of like the rankings don't make sense. Sometimes I am searching for the things (honestly to read something new) and it's hard to find!
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