Satan_Sama

Chapter 5 is out and ohmahgahd, it's so long... I wish I could've split it in half.
          	
          	I'm gonna get back to 1.5-2k words a chap. Doing this much is a good way to burn out.
          	
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Satan_Sama

The more I plan this story... the more ideas keep popping into my head
          
          That's mostly why Chapter 4 is taking a little longer. I'm going back through the previous chapters and tweaking some dialogue while also setting up the AU better.
          
          Nothing crazy though. There aren't A Lot of HUGE changes, most are small changes that'll make things more interesting later on.
          
          The biggest change I've made is how the Miraculous work. Mainly because I wanted Ladybug and Chat Noir to actually feel like equals.
          
          The change is mostly logical. Like how Chat Noir is gonna be a better fighter now, since he's athletic as Adrien. And how Ladybug is gonna be a little more inexperienced in fighting, but has the ability to think outside of the box more, since Marinette's a fashion designer.
          
          In short... Chat Noir is the duelist, while ladybug is the strategist (and the only one who can purify akumas). That way... LB and Chat ACTUALLY need each other to make things work.
          
          Another change is that LB has no "Lucky Vision," so she has to rely on her creative way of thinking to fix things. That way, Chat Noir can also contribute to making plans and/or can help her THINK of a plan by buying her time by fighting off the supervillain.
          
          Also another change: their miraculous ability relies on STAMINA now instead of "use the power and go into 5-minute timer immediately"
          
          What I mean is... Once they hit their limit in stamina (which will drain after first use of ability, until they're close to collapsing), then the five-minute timer starts to warn them to stop and rest.
          
          That means experienced holders can push themselves further.
          
          This also gives me a reason to allow Chat Noir to use Cataclysm at LEAST twice before he utterly collapses, since he definitely has more stamina than Marinette considering his lifestyle.
          
          There are also more changes... But I'll let you find out about that... Probably in chapterrrr... Let's say Chapter 5 will be an interesting reveal.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/413651186

Satan_Sama

Chapter 4 will feature... Alya being obsessed with Greek mythology! because I think her character was boring as hell, and decided to give her more personality!
          
          Will try to finish ch.4 within the week. If I don't publish it by Monday... I probably got too busy with work.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/413651186

Satan_Sama

Low-key having trouble with chapter 3, because I have no idea what Y/N should be saying when he akumatizes Ivan...
          
          He ain't built for villain speeches. He's hard to write zzZ
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/413651186

Miguetaku120

@Satan_Sama Maybe, but taking into account how no Akumatized victim is able to remember what Hawk Moth talked about with them, I don't think there'd be much of a problem.
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Satan_Sama

Stuck in between too much exposition and too vague
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Satan_Sama

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The Odyssey review.
          
          Demons... This may come as a surprise for you... 
          
          But, Christopher Nolan... 
          
          Made a good movie.
          
          Whaaaaat??? No waaaaay- NO SHIT, IT'S CHRISTOPHER NOLAN!!!
          
          The Odyssey is the BEST, and I MEAN the BEST movie I've seen this year (TADC movie second)
          
          Christopher Nolan simply DOES NOT MISS! I'm never doubting his ability ever again.
          
          I thought I'd be disappointed when I heard some stuff were removed in the movie (such as Lotus Eaters, and such) but I'm glad to say I was NOT disappointed at all.
          
          It was perfect... Down to the last minute detail... And that ending... Holy shit I WAS CLAPPING AND CHEERING ALONG WITH THE OTHER PEOPLE IN THE CINEMA. Everyone was clapping and cheering (everyone was probably epic the musical fans ngl)
          
          The movie does SUCH a good job at making me FEEL the things I'm supposed to feel. If it's an eerie scene, I feel chills. if it's a sad scene, I low-key cried... and if it's a hype scene, everyone yells. It's so good.
          
          The cast was also amazing!!!! Everyone's performance was TIP TOP PEAK  S+ tier performance!
          
          Robert Pattinson as Antinous is absolutely, ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! One of my FAVORITE ACTORS AND HE'S PLAYING MY FAVORITE VILLAIN???? Holy match made in Ithaca!
          
          Christopher Nolan made a masterpiece (is that surprising?)
          
          I will say the ONE thing I was sad about was that "Nobody" wasn't included. It was my favorite thing from the epic.
          
          Other than that, I highly, HIGHLY suggest you all watch The Odyssey on cinemas RIGHT NOW! Even BETTER if you can watch it on IMAX! Trust me, IMAX is WAY BETTER!
          
          I rate Odyssey a 600/10. Single-handedly ruined all future movies for me, gg!
          
          I'm gonna watch The Odyssey again with my family, and probably a third time with my friends.
          
          Holy hype bro... It's so amazing. I'm breathless.
          
          

Satan_Sama

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@courierandtheknight Dude, that cyclops was NOT special effects man  that shit was REAL. The first believable cyclops I've ever seen. Every other one-eyed character from movies can't even compare. It's like they pulled that creature straight outta a parallel earth 
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courierandtheknight

I haven’t read the book in a while tho like 5 years but I can recall some bits that were left out and that’s to be expected ig and I think Nolan taking some liberties kinda gave a more modern interpretation of the story and keeping what he thinks should be kept and that’s pretty cool!!!
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courierandtheknight

It was so good, the cyclops bit dead had me shook seeing it in dolby atmos SO DAMN loud ahhh, it’s just so damn good I loved it and Oppenheimer I think both of them compliment each other I loved agememmon and Benny safdie and I MISS sinon god I felt for them it literally is just so good Nolan has some misses (insomnia Batman begins and dark knight rises) but I loved this it is the beginning of a new Nolan. I can’t wait to rewatch it in 70mm imax lol… 
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