hey i just wanted to say YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!! there are stories out there written by native English speaking people who have stories on this site that are not written as well as your stories. patients and determination are great aspects of a writer - breathe and keep trying no matter be proud of your work- the goal of writing is to give a great story that you are proud to say you did that - don't write for others wishes but your own. your style of writing keeps me coming back to reread your stories so be proud and don't let others rude comments get to you,
a good reader should be patient and understand there are others things that have more presence in life than writing.