Shadowrider123

I will be editing chapter two and three  later today, chapter two probably be reposted with the changed ,3 may or may nit be matters how much alteration to fit consistency it needs

Shadowrider123

edit on this, i came down with terrible writers block for last few years not been motivated at all and  not like many were going to read it im returning to writing but want top go through proper process of drafts and making sure it works before posting from now on not the short  badly written work of a teenager that i posted before im ashamed ofmalot of my past writing and need to make a better qoulity
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Shadowrider123

I will be editing chapter two and three  later today, chapter two probably be reposted with the changed ,3 may or may nit be matters how much alteration to fit consistency it needs

Shadowrider123

edit on this, i came down with terrible writers block for last few years not been motivated at all and  not like many were going to read it im returning to writing but want top go through proper process of drafts and making sure it works before posting from now on not the short  badly written work of a teenager that i posted before im ashamed ofmalot of my past writing and need to make a better qoulity
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Focusing in lengthening the chapter almost done all course work so should be more time  18 pages is too short so  I'm trying to add  without messing up the second chapter. I have decided to do void walkers ones a month and do smaller fan fictions  every now and then to  improve my writing style but only with your criticism can i improve so please critics to hell and back  just make it how to improve or what to and nit just "you cant spell idiot , dumb ass ,  illiterate fuck " because that don't help 

Shadowrider123

Im in process of rebooting void walkers as rewritten but things been going in i know literally no one read past the first chapter probabky due to its lack of detail or its pure controversial content but i decided to rewrite the story abit and bring it back with less plot holes taking more time nit to rush it while still getting course work done  i wont post it till the first volume is completed  

JamieBuxton

@Shadowrider123 i have returned brandon
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