Just so you know I think the first chapter of your story..the prologue was good. a bit short but it works for the story..as it was simple but straight to the point and drew me into the rest of the story
My computer is being lame and won't let me comment on stories ....but I'm fanning !
Hey sorry it took me forrreeeeeever to get on here and read your story!! ITS SO AWESOME!!! mmm.. if you have the time maybe you could jump on my page and read I loved You First? Or the poems on there if you want> Cheers.