just_dam_melody

I was going to go follow u, but then I realized I alr do TT

a_happy_cat

HAPPY PRETTY GIRL DAY!!!! ❤
          
          If you get this, then it means you are very pretty n loved.
          
          Tomorrow, something will make you happy, but you have to tell 10 girls.
          
          Hope I get one back! ❤✨
          
          Just copy n paste this to 10 very pretty girls! 
          
          NO group chats.
          
          Good luck! <3
          
          After you do it, check your keyboard.

cle_matis

I didnt write a fanfic...but I did write a story abt the gods if they where mortal and its abt Apollo and Hyacinthus, if you want to would you read it? :,)

checkfaithjessica8

Can you follow my main instead ❤ Thank you so much.

Solangelofannn14

@checkfaithjessica8 ya but which one is ur main?
Balas

just_dam_liana334

HAIIII CO HEAD OF CABIN SIX!!!!! (Camp Elysium @Hazelhazelnut ‘s book!!!) 
          
          IM SO EXITEDDDDDDDDDD (:  

cle_matis

Hey babed I read your first chapter! Okay, so far I would like to day thst it was confusing to fully understand the context (which is okay) everything made partially sense once I started reading along, so what you could do is probably  start the chapter without Nico immediately seeing his sister. Try having him in a sort of 'mood'-ish setting to start it off, then give a few context paragraphs explaining whom hss living with and the relationships he feels for the characters (specifically Annabeth & Percy, since he nearly called her 'mom') to make the resder better understand why he almost slipped up. Because once it switched up from Bianca to Percebeth it kinda caught me off guard and told myself "oh, hes living with them?" Yk? Hope this helps for the first chapter! I'll read more, lemme know if you need any other help! :)