I am just a hack writer.  I get lost when I write stories out of my head and sometimes rattle on too long.  It's fun still, even if I screw it up.  I really enjoy when someone else shares with comments on my story's that they enjoyed anything I've written. I get caught up in unnecessary detail too much and should focus so the reader can use their own vivid creative imagination to take them on the story's path.  But I hope readers will read and comment, good or bad, so I can improve.  I need all the help I can get!  Please vote and comment.  Stay kinky.