SpiritFox1224

Y'all this convo spot deader than my love life and sex drive, like damn. Next three to five chapters of flaming cocoon will be plot. Because this is romance and slice of life, not smutfest. Byeeee

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As to my previous message, I have ideas for how to run the city of Mekh. Ch. 1 will be down for a bit while I fix it. Everything else shall remain, but Ch. 12 has been getting edits as well. I'm getting better at this, slowly but surely. I would also appreciate if I could get comments telling me what to improve and how. Have a good day, if anyone ever reads my stuff anymore.

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@SpiritFox1224 Scratch that, prologue up.
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Noticed I lacked world building, my bad. Anyways, ch. 1 is up with some foreshadowed plot later, and a whole chapter of world info is up, but I tell instead of show because I would like readers to imagine the city layout and such, which is intentional on my part.

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