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@presidentDrake huh... Well, I just read the description of your story and I need to say something from one writer to another.
Your grammar and punctuation is shit.
I can understand that not everyone reads for a living, nor are genius's in English, but please, for everyone's sake, download Grammarly. It's a keyboard grammar checker. It checks your spelling, punctuation, and grammar as you write. It's very useful and I have it. It helps me check any mistakes I make, which is why I always have good grammar. It'll help. So please download it.