Howdy there!
My name is Jasy Jones. 18 years of age! :) I am going into my second year at University and I am double majoring in Spanish and Bilingual Journalism. This is not my first account on here, but I wanted a fresh start with my writing and wanted to work more on my stories. I'm open to all forms of criticism, actually I want anyone who reads my story to critique it. Negative and positive comments are accepted as long as they stay appropriate! You guys can really help me to improve my writing and I hope that by critiquing my story you can improve your own writing! :) :) :)
God Bless! :)