Sparky

Hey love ❤️❤️
          Please check out my story
          
          SHE HAS ALWAYS BEEN HIS
          https://my.w.tt/WiLqea4tgT
          
          
          Please.... pretty please.....puppy eyes pleaseee......
          
          Thanks ❤️

Hi darling
          
          I read a couple of chapters of your bookm i like your evy. She sounds so cute but i feel bad for her being let down by other people.
          
          However as a constructive critique of your book please dont take it negative.
          
          Your writing style is different from mine. If you ever read my first book you see i am not perfect 
          
          However you do a lot of description but no story telling. Its like you giving a lot of monolog but not expression. 
          
          And always remember to when characters are talking. 
          
          But it is a good first attempt. I can see the plot and the family dynamics. There is character development and rapport between mom and daughter. 
          
          PM me if you want to sent me a paragraph for me to review 
          
          
          Xx kayla

Hi StunningNightmare, would you mind checking out my romance book BLUES? 

Hi , 
          
          Thanks a lot for all the  votes and comments on the darkned story and it's sequel . I hope you will like the  lastest addition to the trilogy  : )
          
          And a huge , huge Thanks for the follow . It really means a lot to me