Asia you are good at making a story (a book) but make the format of your story interesting dont make such long paragraphs, make some cuts or make a small paragraph continued by another small paragraph to look less boring.
Example:
Bahay kubo kahit munti, ang halaman doon ay sari-sari. Singkamas at talong. Sigarilyas at mani. Sitaw, bataw, patani, kundol, patola, upo't kalabasa atsaka mayroon pang labanos mustasa.
(Make a good blank space for another paragraph coming para masmalinis tignan and less boring kung basahin)
Sibuyas, kamatis, bawang at luya and etc.
Ading... make your story visible to public not just ONLY YOU who can view. Try to share so that someone can relate your beautiful creation. Complete the said requirements requested by Gmail or Wattpad.
Godbless ading...
