TheDreamcatcherin

You know that feeling when you wrote some comments you now really regret writing because they aren’t true anymore? (And partly are pretty personal or just embarrassing... or both)
          	*Sigh* Gosh I got a bunch of those on here... I’ve been on Wattpad for too long... xD

iamyourlonglostdad

Hello
          it's me 
          
          Tiffany 
          
          I was an idiot and forgot the password to my wattpad but I found it now so hey  
          

TheDreamcatcherin

Hi guys!
          Just wanted to ask you something:
          Could someone do criticism on my poem book "the essence of the Universe"?
          
          I'm not certain how,where and what I can improve on my poems, and I only get positive feedback. (Which is nice and really lovely :3 but...)
          
          Though I'm sensitive with negative feedback, I DO want to have it AND need it. 
          Not every person that reads my poems seems to like it, and I'd like to know why. 
          Thus I'd really appreciate, if you commented a little more. Or, not even everyone, but just someone. 
          The ideal case would be, if someone commented on them, who hasn't commented on them, and has a negative, or partly negative review. 
          
          I'd really appreciate it! 
          Love
          TheDreamcatcherin
          
          Ps: It'd be cool if someone would do that with my German short story book as well, but for now I mainly need it for the poem book :)