Hi guys!
Just wanted to ask you something:
Could someone do criticism on my poem book "the essence of the Universe"?
I'm not certain how,where and what I can improve on my poems, and I only get positive feedback. (Which is nice and really lovely :3 but...)
Though I'm sensitive with negative feedback, I DO want to have it AND need it.
Not every person that reads my poems seems to like it, and I'd like to know why.
Thus I'd really appreciate, if you commented a little more. Or, not even everyone, but just someone.
The ideal case would be, if someone commented on them, who hasn't commented on them, and has a negative, or partly negative review.
I'd really appreciate it!
Love
TheDreamcatcherin
Ps: It'd be cool if someone would do that with my German short story book as well, but for now I mainly need it for the poem book :)