TodorokiShoutoespont

@justabloodyhobbyist It's fine, that's why I signaled it on that one. I read through your story and I love the tension you instantly created! Actually, I think this adaptation is really interesting with the Cullens being the experienced hunters.

@justabloodyhobbyist Alright then. Can I point out any grammar mistakes I found? I don't wanna be rude or anything, that's why I'm asking. I'm not perfect I just noticed. I would write it as a comment to the part. 

@justabloodyhobbyist You're welcome! It is an interesting direction to think about. 

Bro thank you for all the votes it means so muchhh

Thanks for the votes, I really appreciate the kind gesture :)