XavierPhantom

Chapter 6 got a few edits. Still haven't gotten any comments yet on it. I do believe it's the best chapter yet. Please check it out! https://www.wattpad.com/1118207078-weak-humans-chapter-6

XavierPhantom

Would like to thank my 11 followers for sticking with me through this, if you have the time, please consider telling other people about my story, and inviting them to follow me! If you like my writing, that is. 
          
          I do want to make writing my career, so I can only hope my work is sufficient as a sprout that will grow into a tree one day.

XavierPhantom

I am having an incredibly difficult time writing Chapter 5, where Foxtrot Squad is in the Shroud Daisy Lake... so I've decided to skip finishing Chapter 5 and start on 6. 
          
          I may be able to finish 5 sooner with some motivation from you guys though, be sure to leave comments and critique. It really helps me knowing someone enjoys my work.

XavierPhantom

@ImtheBraver Thank you so much! you're the best, will do!
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serenaarenaa

@XavierPhantom I just read your story, and..I really like the story!! Good job, buddy! Keep the good work,bud^^!!
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XavierPhantom

At long last, chapter 4 is finished!  This chapter has been the most difficult to write for sure. It's been hard work coming up with the characters and their reactions to such a dreadful ominous situation.
          
          I only hope that I was able to inspire you.
          
          Enjoy and let me know if you liked it by leaving a star!

XavierPhantom

Why do you think Antigua was so desperate to take the spear, even if it meant killing or seriously injuring our poor Trianna?
          
          (1)  She was jealous that Trianna had something so valuable despite just arriving.
          (2)  She wanted a better weapon because she actually doesn't have one, and Trianna just arrived and already has one.
          (3)  She wants a weapon to kill an Omachy for revenge purposes.
          (4)  <Insert your own theories here!>

Moohahuh

@XavierPhantom i suspect it's option 2. I don't think she likes using a pipe in real fights and wants the spear
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