@Xhira956
i have pointed out some of the grammatical errors (ex: recieve-> receive, reagroup -> regroup) hope you check it out! anyway really goat chapter !
@HaianhNguyen218 I went over them, all of the comments you left for the grammar errors have disappeared so the edits did occur. Maybe it's on your end.
I wonder what you have in store for ENIKK
Remember the guy who wrote the Nikke watching Kamen Rider fic, Xhira. I just how the guy blocked someone 4 times because the blocked one kept talking about the dude’s hate for NIKKEs.
@HaianhNguyen218 Yeah, I do fix all the things you point out. As for the banned guy, that's a shame. But hey, some people just can't accept others may have different opinions. It is what it is I guess.
@Xhira956 anyway how’s the chapter progress ?(and did you fix the grammatical errors i mention before ?)
So would you make another crossover with evangelion in your story ? Since i think the mechas in the franchise can act as a concept for dreadnought/imperial knights
I wonder what Rapi will do when she finds out that the Commander is married to Snow White or how she will react when she hears the DOW says father to the Commander now I know Rapi is conscious in Red hood but how is she coping maybe the reason she is killing Red hood is because she is angry or maybe the corruption is taking hold of her
@ Kieran555555 Rapi is one that likes to keep her thoughts to herself, but she definetely has strong opinions on the Commander's actions.
so what do you plan to do in the next chapter ?
@Xhira956 im glad to help really excited for your next update
@Xhira956 i have pointed out some grammatical errors in your new chapter . you should take a look fix it , either way i really enjoy it
how are you doing ?
Hello Saint Commanders! I'm working on the new chapter for Nikke. If things took a different path already, now I'm going to keep the surprises up with my own made up lore. Is there any request you'd like me to include? Perhaps a character? Maybe you want Y/N to visit a specific place? Or maybe you want a certain topic to be touched in the story?
I'll read all of your suggestions! Peace.
*Xhira956 well i guess you should add jien from the game as a punisher fot rebellious nikkes and criminals like what she did to yuni