Hi everyone. This is my first try to be an autor and English is not my first language. I'm still learning. I've been translating my story with AI and it may contain some suspisious marks, but it's fully authentic original story. 
I'm not aiming for a profit now; I just need your honest opinion about my creation. I love it with all my heart and that parental love makes me somewhat blind. I need your honest thoughts, critique or maybe... support... if you trully enjoy it.

Anyway, I'd be greatful for any attention. It encourages me to keep going and maybe write something better.