Alex Schattner

Would like some advice on my story. It's my first and would love ideas. Much appreciated love xx

hello

@RiverNova The story sounds good. Jealousy can lead people to do crazy things. I wonder if Noir Ciel still really wants to be liked, even if she starts pretending that she doesn't. 
          
          As for describing the clothes, It's best not to get too caught up in the details. Whenever you get to that kind of description in the story, make a note like: (add clothing description here), mark it in red, and continue on. You can always do research when the story is completed.

@RiverNova I would be happy to help. What is your story about?

Hello sir ! I enjoyed reading your book I wanna translate it in French . Do you mind ? 
          I'm waiting your answer .

I absolutely love your modern day fairy tale stories!! I read them to my younger cousin and she loves them. @alexschattner You're a great writer

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