Alex Schattner

@alexschattner 
            Thanks for the advice.

@RiverNova The story sounds good. Jealousy can lead people to do crazy things. I wonder if Noir Ciel still really wants to be liked, even if she starts pretending that she doesn't. 
            
            As for describing the clothes, It's best not to get too caught up in the details. Whenever you get to that kind of description in the story, make a note like: (add clothing description here), mark it in red, and continue on. You can always do research when the story is completed.

@alexschattner 
            It's a different version of Snow White, told all by a new perspective. I made Snow White into a villainous and manipulative character. Basically making the whole fairytale a lot darker. 
            
             The sort of protagonist is named Noir Ciel (meaning Black Sky in French), who was the evil queen's biological daughter. She grew up hated and disliked because she often the blamed by Snow White for a various amount of mishaps. Eventually she began to notice how much everyone loved Snow White and Noir Ciel stopped trying to make everyone love or at least tolerate her. Instead she began make people hate her because it was the only emotion, she could provoke
             from anyone really. 
            
             When she is granted Queenship by the dying King Henry. It turns heads considering no one really likes her.
            
             That's where the story really begins. I have one of the prologue chapters already uploaded but I have trouble describing the medieval clothes.

I appreciate your offer, but I do not wish to have the book translated at this time.

Thank you for the offer, but I do not wish to have the book translated at this time.