@ 0scar_97 I read your story, and I really like it! Sometimes its difficult to follow and all the ideas you have sometimes come unhooked. But they're really good ideas and if you fix a few grammatical errors this book will be absolutely amazing and the storyline is absolutely gorgeous already. If you want, you could send me your next chapter, I could revise it and send it back to you. If you like them, you could post it. I could be your editor of sorts! Only if you want of course. I'm sorry if I seem crazy but your story has really excited me!
