Hi, I just wanted to say that I've read the prologue, and the first chapter of, "Life," and it's so good, so far!! It segues between the description, and the dialogue flawlessly, and I know from personal experience that, that's not particularly easy to do. :p
I look forward to reading more, and again, sorry for the corrections, while they are insignificant, and common they are still there, and I, unfortunately, have a knack for finding them :D.
I hope you find the inspiration to update soon, as I know it can be quite difficult to become inspired sometimes. :)