blaqcklotus

@Peachez_n_Cream Thank you for your opinions, I'll try to make sure of those elements in future stories! :)

Peachez_n_Cream

@blaqcklotus-
          The last prom dress- I think you should add more substance to the story. I know it's a short story but add a little more detail.
          Endless war- I think this story is better than the last prom dress, it's very sad. In this one though, don't explain too much, it'll make the story flow smoothly :)