bluecountrygirl

Hey guys so I'm going to be doing more updates and redoing some old chapters, nothing major just adjusting to flow smoother. 
          	
          	Anyway I'm getting back into writing again, and I know I will be very rusty with it so, if you wouldn't mind giving me helpful comments when needed I would appreciate it! 
          	
          	Here comes more "Young & Clever!"

bluecountrygirl

Hey guys so I'm going to be doing more updates and redoing some old chapters, nothing major just adjusting to flow smoother. 
          
          Anyway I'm getting back into writing again, and I know I will be very rusty with it so, if you wouldn't mind giving me helpful comments when needed I would appreciate it! 
          
          Here comes more "Young & Clever!"

shreya07

hey Blue!  how r ya?  I miss ur votes and comments!  :( u were the one person that believed in TPL, and it helped me to know someone was out there rooting for me!  And please do update young and clever!  you were doing so well with it!  Don't let others work get u to criticize yourself!  everyone has a different way of writing and that's what makes us unique!  don't lose hope and persevere! u rock!  :) ~Shreya

bluecountrygirl

To all my readers of 'young & clever' 
          
          I've been feeling very uninspired lately and the more I read other books on WattPad the more I critique my own! I feel as if it is a little slow and that I've drug the book out a little too long!
          
           I want it to be incredible with all my thoughts and ideas, but I never intended it to be a thousand page novel! I don't think I should delete it yet, but would it be better if I took out some chapters and edited it to not be so drug out, but still follow along with my intended story? 
          
          This is one message I would really appreciate if anyone would comment with regards to it, and give me a little advise and help. Not only can I at times be a little bit of a perfectionist, but it really doesn't help when you current subject in highs school is English!!! 
          
          For those that have any interest at all in my; choppy, bad grammar, all over the board writing. Please help!