kk. so i read 'let's play' and the only thing i can say is that it very obviously needs editing with the caps but that is about it. i like it. now on to your next one!!!
Hiya...I was wondering if you can read my story called 'Lets Play...' or my other book called Beat of the Music...feel free to tell me which one you like more and also what I can do better to improve....
I am really sorry about that:( I just wasn't sure if it was good and then I couldn't figure any way to keep it going. So then I restarted and then deleted the other one. I am still trying things out so lately I have been thinking stories through to see if I could keep it going. I will try to come up with a new way to write it. :)