YzYan38

Thanks for the follow
          
          Hope you will like my work :)
          Please go through this and give me some feedback. So that I can improve my skills in future ❤
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/250906341-what-next

collyleen

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collyleen

For the others 
            Maybe any additional write up is better written in italics or bold fonts. Writing it in bracket format isn't always advisable 
            Then the point of view you want your book to be written from should also be included, that is, it can either be in third person pov all through our interchange between characters POV
            For the conversations, don't write it like you write text messages exchanged between characters, it should be written as part of the book 
            
            The other chapters were a little bit mind-numbing and dull. There wasn't real entertainment to attract attention from readers
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YzYan38

Thanks a lot for your feedback. It's will help me. I will definitely keep those in mind.
            How about other chapter's? Give me feedback on those chapters as well. So that I could improve next chapters.
            Thanks again ❤️
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