Hey guys, I posted the edited edition of chapters 6-9.
I pretty much gutted the storyline there from the original. Please tell me if you like it...
Also, if you wouldn't mind, go back to the beginning, read through, and especially in the transition for chapter 5 to chapter 6 postings, tell me if the transition is clear. If there is any confusion, post to my wall, comment on the chapter, just let me know...
Thank you all so much for being so devoted to this whole shpeal. Y'all are amazing and I really appreciate your eyes!
Blessings!